" Every heart stopped beating, every breath was held, every eye fixed immovably upon that man. Without the slightest hesitation, he went to the door on the right, and opened it. " He had a slight doubt whether to trust the king's daughter and he was not so sure which door to pick. He turned around, looked at her eyes and that is when he knew he had to trust her. With that he turned around to look at the door on the right.
Everyone was quiet as if he was there alone. He reached out his hands, just as he was about to turn the nob the audience gasped with fear! As he was turning the nob he contemplated whether he would see the lady, and if he did would he kill her or let her live! As he opened the door, he screamed in fright as he fought for his life, trying to get away from the fierce, hungry, and deadly tiger. The audience was too busy yelling and shouting- it was too hard to hear exactly what each one of them were saying. In just a few minutes he was teared apart, blood everywhere, flesh, and guts everywhere.
Just as the semi-barbaric princess saw him, she just shed one tear, and pretended like nothing had happened. She left the amphitheater and saw her dad, the king, and they left to their the castle and had a nice quiet evening. For they all lived happily ever after, alone but rich.
I like your ending a lot, I think it is a little depressing. However it was really good.
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