Wednesday, October 29, 2014

Weekly Bog "A Thunderous Whisper"

A Thunderous Whisper
October 29, 2014
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Prompt:  Pretend you are famous reporter on TV. Write a story about what you’ve read
for the evening news.

        Good morning Chicago, and welcome to the daily evening news. As you have probably seen the Sardinera lady is selling very good sardines. If you are interested she will be selling them every day, so if you miss it today, there is always tomorrow. Well enough about the sardines, I am here to tell you about the Sardinera's daughter Anetxu, and about how she is living throughout the Civil War time. She is often very shy at school and is not all that social. Well her daughter always comes with her to help her sell the sardines, except on Mondays. Well this one day after she came back from school, she went straight to her favorite spot under a tree at the park. You might be thinking that she sounds like she is just some ordinary child that just does ordinary teenage things, but she is not she is like a whisper, that is quiet and does not like to be heard or not really all that social. At the park came a young man up to her, about her age. He barely came to this town because his family moves a lot . He introduces himself, and at first Anetxu did not want to talk to him and she kind of wanted for him to leave her alone. Then she starts getting to know him a little bit better. Then as it turns out his father works for a pretty fancy theater, and she has never gone to one. Then the young boy named Mathias asked her if he would like to go with him to the theater at no cost. She said that she would love to.

        Then Mathias left back to his house, as so did Anetxu. Anetxu right when she got home, she went straight to her mom to tell her if she could go to the movie theater, but her mom seemed like she was not in such a good mood. Anetxu seemed like she was too scared to tell her so instead she told her mom that she was not feeling good and she felt that she needed to go to the doctor. Her mom believed her and told her that she did not afford the doctor so she told her to stay home tomorrow instead of going to school. The next day she woke up and her mother had left to go sell sardines. She got ready and put on a brown dress for the movie theater. She wrote a note saying that she went out to get some fresh air. Then she left to the movie at 4:00 p.m.

     She got to the theater and saw Mathias sitting on the steps of the theater, but she started getting a waver feeling She started telling her self that it was not a good idea of coming and that she could go back. Just as she turned back and was about to walk back home, Mathias saw her and yelled out her name to tell her to come back. She did and they both went inside the theater. The deal that Mathias made with her father was that he was able to bring her to the theater but they had to clean up a little before the movie began. After they were done cleaning they saw Mathias' father go into the projector room for the movie. After a little bit of sitting they decided that his father probably needed some help in the projector room, and that it was easier to see the movie there. As they were about to enter they heard a bunch of voices speaking about the civil war that was going on, and about a german warship that was of the coast of Bilbao.Another thing they heard them say was that all the information they had was right but they still have to relay the message a little bit. Mathias was excited to hear what they were talking about because he has always expected that was father was secretly an agent for the civil war. Anetxu was a bit nervous because Mathias was german so she did not know exactly what side they were on. Then his father head Mathias and how they were eavesdropping. A bunch of people that Anetxu had seen before were apart of the group, like Priest Inaki. They knew the girl too, so they thought that it would be good for them to help in the plan. Anetxu being the whisper and shy girl is did not know if she should go along with this plan. 

Well that is all I got for you. After this long news, I hope you are now caught with what is going on in today's world. Thank you and Have nice Evening. Good Bye Chicago!

        


1 comment:

  1. Dear Bianey, I like your formatting, I just think you need pictures.
    -The one and only Evie

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