I think this was a good blog, but my only suggestion is to not put parenthesis in the poem. Otherwise, I think that you did a good job making it really relate to your life.
I like the idea of butterflies and I also really like what you wrote about the rose but maybe you can explain how its different but yet the same. Also, where is Ocotlan?
Wow! This is really good! I love the rose part! I thought that the 8 hour music was a bit much though.
ReplyDeleteI think this was a good blog, but my only suggestion is to not put parenthesis in the poem. Otherwise, I think that you did a good job making it really relate to your life.
ReplyDeleteI like the idea of butterflies and I also really like what you wrote about the rose but maybe you can explain how its different but yet the same. Also, where is Ocotlan?
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