Monday, March 23, 2015

Spine Poem



                  
            I wanted to create a poem that would portray the way that life is, the world we live in. We are just a little planet at the corner of the universe. We measure our lives with years and days of happiness or filled with dismal, and this is Nothing But the Truth. Life is a long journey, and we as kids are just beginning. We are A Long Way Gone from the end of our journey in life. We are Almost Home, we are almost at the part of our lives when we know how our life is going to carry out.

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  1. AnonymousMarch 25, 2015 at 7:10 AM

    Your poem was very interesting Bianey. I was a little confused with some of the words of the poem, but your description and interpretation really helped. You stayed on the same topic throughout your poem for the most part, and had the right amount of lines. Good job!

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